Weekly Activities

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Weekly Activities

Weekly Activities
What are some weekly activities that you do?
I go grocery shopping once a week at the local supermarket.
My family does the housework together every Saturday morning.
I usually do the washing on Sunday morning and when the machine is finished I hang the clothes out to dry.
On Sunday morning we go to church, and if there is lots of noise coming from next door, sometimes we fight with the neighbour.
On Saturday night my parents stay at home and I go out with friends.
Even my friends that live at home call their parents each week.
Every evening, I water the garden.
I usually pay someone to wash the car, but my partner says I should do it, so sometimes I argue with my partner about that.
If we are angry at the neighbour, we seek vengeance by annoying his dogs.
I work in an important office, so I have to shine my shoes each day.
Sometimes we hire a movie, because we don't like to illegally download music and films. I make sure that I synchronise my iPod so I always have new music on it.
To get our shopping, we go to the mall in the car.
Last week I forgot to recharge my travel card, and I had to argue with a bus driver. I couldn't call the office because I forgot to recharge my cellphone!

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Sentence: On Sunday morning we go to church, and if there is lots of noise coming from next door, sometimes we fight with the neighbour.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and lots

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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.75 21.0
No. of Words: 236 350

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 236 350
No. of Characters: 959 1500
No. of Different Words: 134 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.919 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.338 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.056 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.385 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5