Some people say that debt to bank the best choice than looking for a job to obtain money. Discuss both of them and give your opinion!

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Some people say that debt to bank the best choice than looking for a job to obtain money. Discuss both of them and give your opinion!

Now days, quality of life is ever-increasing. Everything is always about money. Money is very important for life. People cannot do anything without money. People try to get money with different method. Some people think that debt to Bank the best choice than looking for a job to obtain money. Analyzing both the ability to obtain money that debt to Bank as well as people looking for job will show this.

Firstly, everyone needs money in every step in their life. Sometimes people have enough money or some time need a lot of money. People think best method to get much money, which is debt in the Bank. Many reason people debt money to Bank. For example, they want to start a business but they don’t have much money. They want to debt money in the Bank because debt to bank is very easy. They are just preparing some document and certificate. Such as, ID card, family card, land certificate and other.

Secondly, everyone in the world is looking for a job. They need a job because they need money to their life. Money is only one aspect for one to choose a job. They can get a lot of money if they have a good job. The most important aspect of a job is good quality life they can achieve as their job outcome. More high quality a job, so they would be high result.

In my opinion, for obtaining money from job is better than to debt in the Bank. Although, we have a lot of money with fast method but finally it would be trouble. For example, we always thinking about how method to return the money. To be different with get money from the Bank, money from a job will not problem. Because, that is come from work hard. Although, would be long time to get much money.

In conclusion, money is very important for life. We can do anything and we can buy anything. We need money every step our life. We can get money with many methods. We can get money from a job or we can get money from debt in the Bank. However, many methods to obtain money, we are always to ready confront the consequences.

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Sentence: Many reason people debt money to Bank.
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Sentence: To be different with get money from the Bank, money from a job will not problem.
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Sentence: We need money every step our life.
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Sentence: However, many methods to obtain money, we are always to ready confront the consequences.
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