The hunter and the woodcutter

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The hunter and the woodcutter

The hunter, not very bold, was searching for the track of a lion. He asked a man felling oaks in the forest if he had seen any marks of his footsteps or knew where his lair was. "I will," said the man, "at once show the lion himself." The hunter, turning very pale and chattering with his teeth from fear, replied, "No, thank you. I did not ask that; it is his track only I am in search of, not the lion himself.".................................................

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No. of Words: 83 250 //need to write more

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Final score: 4.0 out of 6
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 83 250
No. of Characters: 310 1200
No. of Different Words: 59 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.018 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.735 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.817 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 12 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 8 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 3 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 3 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.587 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.508 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.508 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5