The following appeared in article in the grand view Beacon. Grand view symphony had funding by grand review from many years, from last years private contribution to symphony increased so that they may develope and increase cost of ticket, so that grand review may conclude that funding to symphony be eliminated from next year's budget. There are several assumption made by author. before implementing the act so let's look in given arguments.
Grand review who annual funding to grand symphony from many years. from how many years an grand review fund to grand symphony? annual fund for only maintainance activity or total development. from an last year private contribution to symphony increased by 200 percent and attendance at symphony concerts in the park series doubled. Even though from many years grand review has funded to grand symphony,why grand symphony required an private contribution.The funding ratio 200 percent increase and also attendance at symphony doubled.Private contribution may check all facility and funded for development on other hand grand review which only annually funded have not survey, the exact requirement. so that ratio attendance to doubled from last years.
Grand symphony also increase there ticket rates. What changes are made to attract the person to visit an grand symphony. the author need an survey to find out differences in previous and current situation. The rate of ticket increase from nect year, it's hold true the publicity may attract recently towards grand symphony, but it might different situation for next year. if they to maintain there publicity and some one another came and may people attract so there might huge loss.
Even though an private contribution may help to change grand symphony to development, it's not possible to maintain an this development or change for next few years. some commissioner argue that now grand symphony can fully self supporting, so that funding them elemenated from next year budegt. Even though it's profit for grand review, it may suffer to grand symphony. If ticket are rises then may not offered to visit grand symphony, so it may leads to words again previous situation for grand symphony. Commissioner have look before concluding that whether how amount remaining, so that grand symphony may independently work.
To sum up with all, Author may need to ask several question before concluding any statement. so, argument to strengthen only if an question to answered.
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 21 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 398 350
No. of Characters: 2029 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.467 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.098 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.528 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.908 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.479 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.687 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.23 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...nated from next years budget. There are several assumption made by author. before implementing the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...om next years budget. There are several assumption made by author. before implementing the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
... are several assumption made by author. before implementing the act so lets look in gi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... author. before implementing the act so lets look in given arguments. Grand revie...
^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...ding to grand symphony from many years. from how many years an grand review fund to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ny from many years. from how many years an grand review fund to grand symphony? an...
^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Annual
...an grand review fund to grand symphony? annual fund for only maintainance activity or ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...tainance activity or total development. from an last year private contribution to sy...
^^^^
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nce activity or total development. from an last year private contribution to symph...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , why
...rand review has funded to grand symphony,why grand symphony required an private cont...
^^^^
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd symphony,why grand symphony required an private contribution.The funding ratio ...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...mphony required an private contribution.The funding ratio 200 percent increase and ...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding ratio 200 percent increase and also attendance at symphony doubled.Private c...
^^
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Private
...nd also attendance at symphony doubled.Private contribution may check all facility and...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'surveyed'.
Suggestion: surveyed
...iew which only annually funded have not survey, the exact requirement. so that ratio a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...have not survey, the exact requirement. so that ratio attendance to doubled from l...
^^
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...have not survey, the exact requirement. so that ratio attendance to doubled from last y...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...are made to attract the person to visit an grand symphony. the author need an surv...
^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the person to visit an grand symphony. the author need an survey to find out diffe...
^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...isit an grand symphony. the author need an survey to find out differences in previ...
^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ight different situation for next year. if they to maintain there publicity and so...
^^
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...if they to maintain there publicity and some one another came and may people attract so ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o there might huge loss. Even though an private contribution may help to change...
^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...velopment, its not possible to maintain an this development or change for next few...
^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and this'?
Suggestion: and this
...velopment, its not possible to maintain an this development or change for next few year...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'an' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: an; this
...velopment, its not possible to maintain an this development or change for next few year...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...velopment or change for next few years. some commissioner argue that now grand symph...
^^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...e for next few years. some commissioner argue that now grand symphony can fully self ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...sum up with all, Author may need to ask several question before concluding any statement. so, ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...estion before concluding any statement. so, argument to strengthen only if an ques...
^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ent. so, argument to strengthen only if an question to answered.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2582278481 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70361967841 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463291139241 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.70958083832 369% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 76.977792762 57.8364921388 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4090909091 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04545454545 5.70786347227 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.25449101796 590% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272703249631 0.218282227539 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100247428226 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091678300627 0.0701772020484 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161432124895 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104270851237 0.0628817314937 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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