On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.
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The author claims that because of the increase of number of people who use mopeds as a transportation way during summer, the number of accidents increases and the council of the Balmer Island decides to reduce the allowed number to be rented by the rental companies to half. The argument has many weak and hidden points and there are also many assumptions may tend to be not correct.
First of all, the author says that the goal from reducing the number of mopeds during summer is to reduce the number of accidents. Here there are many questions pose themselves. Why the number of population does increase during summer months and what the connection between this increase with the moped accidents?. If the accidents happen from people that came to Balmer during summer, should the Balmer’s council have to ban using moped without license proves the ability for the rider to drive moped?
Furthermore, the author mentions that the rental companies will reduce the number of an available moped from 50 to 25, but the author does not say if there is another form of transportation that people can use instead of moped. For example, maybe the council can provide the cell as an another option for people. Moreover, the board can take some steps to reduce the number of accidents as a solution for the problem. For instance, they can provide special routes for mopeds’ riders.
Finally, the author says that the decision was taken from the council after the Sallie's town reduced the number of moped rentals but here there are many vague points.First, we do not know whether Seavellie's city provided another option for people to use instead of moped. Moreover, we do not have any information about Seavellie’s area, and that is considered as a critical factor to decide the reduction percentage of the moped for Balmer town.
In sum, the author provides many assumptions without apparent reasons. And the decision taken from Balmer town does not depend on careful studies and numbers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an option' or 'another option'.
Suggestion: an option; another option
...ybe the council can provide the cell as an another option for people. Moreover, the board can tak...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...ls but here there are many vague points.First, we do not know whether Seavellies city...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276315789474 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.142105263158 0.15541462614 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0836205057962 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0421052631579 0.0520304965353 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0105263157895 0.0272364105082 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144736842105 0.125424944231 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0210526315789 0.0416121511921 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5802786606 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.026700313972 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128947368421 0.113004496875 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184210526316 0.0255425247493 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.0127820249294 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2017.0 2731.13054187 74% => OK
No of words: 337.0 446.07635468 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98516320475 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.57801047555 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40059347181 0.378187486979 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237388724036 0.287650121315 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148367952522 0.208842608468 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0919881305638 0.135150697306 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5802786606 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 207.018472906 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480712166172 0.469332199767 102% => OK
Word variations: 49.0969092882 52.1807786196 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0714285714 23.2022227129 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9921396818 57.7814097925 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.071428571 141.986410481 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 23.2022227129 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.724660767414 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.58251231527 56% => OK
Readability: 47.810300975 51.9672348444 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.27027027027 1.8405768891 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.638171387857 0.441005458295 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118210935415 0.135418324435 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0977631944244 0.0829849096947 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631645187224 0.58762219726 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199952841643 0.147661913831 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28617790737 0.193483328276 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183486948238 0.0970749176394 189% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497562104986 0.42659136922 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.139088713679 0.0774707102158 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.442056042349 0.312017818177 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145218406679 0.0698173142475 208% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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