Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain h

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Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Technology are involving more and more in our life. We use daily to do some works and save time and maybe money. Albeit that human use technology in approximately in their whole daily life, the ability to think and to be creative will not be harmed for them at all.

First of all, humans tend to be more dependable on technology on their daily life because life becomes more sophisticated than before. We have noticed that there are a lot of developments in all fields of science from space to daily life issues. People tend to use technology more because it helps them to save time and efforts for something else that technology cannot solve. For example, scientist use supercomputers to solve some extremely complicated issues that would take years for humans to do using traditional papers and pens. They have to focus on something more significant and analysis the results to take decisions that machine cannot take and say what to do in the next step in the operation.

Most significantly, technology cannot play by itself. Humans have always to give it orders and control it to gain some results. Technology makes life easier for some people but that does not mean that people become less intelligent and their ability to think reduces. Moreover, we can notice that the main use for technology is in the regular life issues that do not need high intelligence to be done. Furthermore, machine may break done in anytime and suggest who will fix it? yes , one of the specialist that belongs to human.

Finally, technology play important role in our life and that ;obviously, have some negative effects on our life. People tend to be lazier and depend completely on machines and technology. We all know that the physical health is extremely significant for humans. Many scientist always warn people to keep doing sport and do not use machine in every part of them life. For instance, they encourage people to go for walking for half an hour daily but some people use sport machine to do sport and they gain the same results or maybe more benefit from traditional ways.

In sum, machines and technology makes our life easier and people tend to be lazier but the does not mean that they lose their ability to think and take critical decisions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
Technology are involving more and more in our life. We use daily...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... We have noticed that there are a lot of developments in all fields of science fr...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yes
...in anytime and suggest who will fix it? yes , one of the specialist that belongs to...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...anytime and suggest who will fix it? yes , one of the specialist that belongs to h...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scientist seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many scientists'.
Suggestion: Many scientists
...th is extremely significant for humans. Many scientist always warn people to keep doing sport ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225882352941 0.25644967241 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.181176470588 0.15541462614 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752941176471 0.0836205057962 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0682352941176 0.0520304965353 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0564705882353 0.0272364105082 207% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110588235294 0.125424944231 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0211764705882 0.0416121511921 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55039409577 2.79052419416 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0541176470588 0.026700313972 203% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0564705882353 0.113004496875 50% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188235294118 0.0255425247493 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117647058824 0.0127820249294 92% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2254.0 2731.13054187 83% => OK
No of words: 391.0 446.07635468 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76470588235 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291560102302 0.378187486979 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204603580563 0.287650121315 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135549872123 0.208842608468 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107416879795 0.135150697306 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55039409577 2.79052419416 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 207.018472906 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457800511509 0.469332199767 98% => OK
Word variations: 48.5195954833 52.1807786196 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.039408867 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.55 23.2022227129 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6265335871 57.7814097925 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.7 141.986410481 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 23.2022227129 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.724660767414 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.58251231527 140% => OK
Readability: 40.0103580563 51.9672348444 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.16923076923 1.8405768891 64% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242426453741 0.441005458295 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0981119762361 0.135418324435 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0758665315435 0.0829849096947 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503928744222 0.58762219726 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17375409621 0.147661913831 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104227381991 0.193483328276 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646243226393 0.0970749176394 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.461007406382 0.42659136922 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0391801840095 0.0774707102158 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194079566328 0.312017818177 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132091313244 0.0698173142475 19% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.33743842365 132% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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