The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of a company that specializes in the delivery of heating oil.
"Most homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last heating season, that region experienced 90 days with below-normal temperatures, and climate forecasters predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes are being built in the region in response to recent population growth. Because of these trends, we can safely predict that this region will experience an increased demand for heating oil during the next five years."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author mentions in the 5 years there is a surge in the use of oil for heating and this conclusion has lots of big faults. first of all, there is no mention of the usage of wood and the forest vegetation in the land, on the other hand, these days people likely try new ways of living perhaps they like use green fuels instead of an old one. what is normal weather there is no guarantee that the forecast was true since for each person the right condition of living is different?
firstly, the inhabitants like to wood and trees as a traditional way of warming themselves because of the reliability and the cost of wood. it is understandable for this people to the interest in their traditions. if there was some questionnaire about their interest perhaps its leads to a new comprehensive conclusion with more reliability.
secondly, nowadays people hear about new way of transportation, communication and notable technology in building the house; it is understandable why people like to use these state-of-art technologies so when authority wants to make the decision they should also think about this solution, moreover, parents like to conserve the world for the next generation maybe they can tolerate so chilly weather.
thirdly, what is normal weather a few people like to spend much more time in their home since they choose the sedentary lifestyle and they like the way they living? so it is agreeable they spend less and less oil for heating leisure center.
not just this but also, in the hard winter, they could go to the place with better air condition thanks to the internet they can work from distance.
In the conclusion, lots of the primes like the green fuels, people preference and the place of modern technology was ignored in this essay.and this makes the conclusion so faulty with a big bug on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 317.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7665615142 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71963811016 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.471057884232 425% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5479180401 57.8364921388 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.363636364 119.503703932 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 23.324526521 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 5.70786347227 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912900698361 0.218282227539 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468736326152 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042889822822 0.0701772020484 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472911504762 0.128457276422 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352630251833 0.0628817314937 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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