Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
This argument tells us that Nature's Way chain of stores can open new store in Plainsville town and it will be successful. This conclusion based on numerous assumptions like there is no data presented that how many people of the town are attending health club and weight training and aerobics classes regularly. Good selling rate of running shoes and exercise clothes doesn't give any proof that people are also interested in healthy food and other health-related products. Authors surmised that if fitness-for-life program is mandatory for children than they will be potential customers for Nature's Way store.
Plainsville merchants report sales of running shoes and exercise clothes are high, from this information author assumes that people are also interested in healthy food and other health related products sold by Nature's Way store. There could be a possibility that Merchants reports show data for one particular season or year, not a average report of few years and sales was high because of some fitness program going on in the city or people are on vacation and have more time to spend on fitness activities which they might not continue or there might be many visitors came to city for vacation and they were buying fitness shoes and clothes because of which sales went up and it happens only in some months of the year, not whole year. Author mentions sales are high at all time, but there is no particular time frame mentioned.
As per argument local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are full. Author is assuming from this information is that Nature's Way store will sell more products as people are more aware about fitness actives. There is missing link between information provided in the argument and actor's assumption. Data is missing about attendance of club and class members. Are they attending club regularly or they just enrolled and not coming regularly. Club might have discounts for permotions going on and people enrolled in the club to avail this opportunity.
Author also assumes that if schoolchildren are require to participate in a fitness-for-life program then they are the potential customers of health products. It is possible that children are not interested in health activities, they are just doing to full program requirements and will not continue. This shows it can't be surmised that schoolchildren are the potential consumers.
According to above analysis, this argument is rife with assumptions which if false can weaken the argument. Survey needs to be conducted to understand the need of store in the city and to know more about health products and food consumers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Way) must be used with a third-person verb: 'chains'.
Suggestion: chains
...This argument tells us that Natures Way chain of stores can open new store in Plainsv...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e of running shoes and exercise clothes doesnt give any proof that people are also int...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... for one particular season or year, not a average report of few years and sales w...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...also assumes that if schoolchildren are require to participate in a fitness-for-life pr...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'participating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: participating
...umes that if schoolchildren are require to participate in a fitness-for-life program then they...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ts and will not continue. This shows it cant be surmised that schoolchildren are the...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ts and will not continue. This shows it cant be surmised that schoolchildren are the...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...argument is rife with assumptions which if false can weaken the argument. Survey n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302375809935 0.25644967241 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.177105831533 0.15541462614 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0907127429806 0.0836205057962 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388768898488 0.0520304965353 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0259179265659 0.0272364105082 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131749460043 0.125424944231 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0453563714903 0.0416121511921 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70424995665 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194384449244 0.026700313972 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0583153347732 0.113004496875 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215982721382 0.0255425247493 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0107991360691 0.0127820249294 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2671.0 2731.13054187 98% => OK
No of words: 438.0 446.07635468 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09817351598 6.12365571057 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344748858447 0.378187486979 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27397260274 0.287650121315 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191780821918 0.208842608468 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123287671233 0.135150697306 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70424995665 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 207.018472906 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442922374429 0.469332199767 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.4037263067 52.1807786196 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3333333333 23.2022227129 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.3685056898 57.7814097925 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.388888889 141.986410481 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.2022227129 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.277777777778 0.724660767414 38% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.7305936073 51.9672348444 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.98214285714 1.8405768891 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320376504048 0.441005458295 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116638688883 0.135418324435 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.053324699095 0.0829849096947 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539569543274 0.58762219726 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13491904199 0.147661913831 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13030403958 0.193483328276 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815748333589 0.0970749176394 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314219512244 0.42659136922 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0753341419159 0.0774707102158 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230858083377 0.312017818177 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585741830993 0.0698173142475 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 14.657635468 89% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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