A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food and determined that all chemicals found in the food were chemicals that are approved for use in pet food. Thus, the recalled food was not responsible for these symptoms, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author's argument states that 4 million pounds of pet food has been recalled in response to the complaint that after consuming the food pets have experienced vomiting and many other signs of illness. It also states that they have tested the sample and found that it is not responsible for all the above symptoms hence the company is not further devoting any resources on the investigation. According to me there are many fallacies in the argument stated by the author. These flaws are stated in the following paragraphs.
Author states that company tested the samples, but no evident information is been provided whether the test was correct or not. There might be situation that the test being conducted is flawed. No name of a established firm is mentioned which authorizes that the test was significant enough so that we can reckon it. Hence this point of the author is not justified.
In addition,it is also stated that all the chemicals determine in the test are the ones which are approved for use in pet food,hence they are not responsible. But the proportion in which they were present in the pet food is not mentioned. It might be possible that all chemicals present were pertinent but they are not present in apposite proportions, which leads to signs of illness in the pets. Hence this claim is not at all justified.
Moreover,it is stated that 4 million pounds of pet food is recalled and that is only tested. This might be possible that this pet food might be called from a particular state and the defected products are in some other states. Hence without investigating further samples from different states one cannot lucidly claim that symptoms are not because of company's pet food. Hence further investigation is required on few more samples from all different states.
At the end I will say, more pertinent and statistical data is required to justify the argument of the author.Provided data is not sufficient enough to reckon. Hence the claims provided are completely unjustified and flawed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The authors argument states that 4 million pounds o...
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...found that it is not responsible for all the above symptoms hence the company is ...
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...ing any resources on the investigation. According to me there are many fallacies in the argumen...
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...t being conducted is flawed. No name of a established firm is mentioned which aut...
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...ficant enough so that we can reckon it. Hence this point of the author is not justifi...
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... author is not justified. In addition,it is also stated that all the chemicals d...
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...s which are approved for use in pet food,hence they are not responsible. But the propo...
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... leads to signs of illness in the pets. Hence this claim is not at all justified. ...
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...ess in the pets. Hence this claim is not at all justified. Moreover,it is stat...
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...im is not at all justified. Moreover,it is stated that 4 million pounds of pet...
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...stified. Moreover,it is stated that 4 million pounds of pet food is recalled a...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...cted products are in some other states. Hence without investigating further samples f...
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...urther samples from different states one cannot lucidly claim that symptoms are n...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...s are not because of companys pet food. Hence further investigation is required on fe...
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...d to justify the argument of the author.Provided data is not sufficient enough to reckon...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ata is not sufficient enough to reckon. Hence the claims provided are completely unju...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214092140921 0.25644967241 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.208672086721 0.15541462614 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921409214092 0.0836205057962 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514905149051 0.0520304965353 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0352303523035 0.0272364105082 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127371273713 0.125424944231 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0731707317073 0.0416121511921 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7282595257 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0135501355014 0.026700313972 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.113004496875 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189701897019 0.0255425247493 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108401084011 0.0127820249294 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2025.0 2731.13054187 74% => OK
No of words: 341.0 446.07635468 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93841642229 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.57801047555 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33137829912 0.378187486979 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269794721408 0.287650121315 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187683284457 0.208842608468 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120234604106 0.135150697306 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7282595257 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 207.018472906 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460410557185 0.469332199767 98% => OK
Word variations: 46.7042216348 52.1807786196 90% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9444444444 23.2022227129 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6813777867 57.7814097925 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 141.986410481 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 23.2022227129 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.724660767414 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 3.58251231527 447% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.9239165852 51.9672348444 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.40366972477 1.8405768891 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489642019622 0.441005458295 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.170703924635 0.135418324435 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116027504382 0.0829849096947 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595918652179 0.58762219726 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145577771926 0.147661913831 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196150219583 0.193483328276 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135967934086 0.0970749176394 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309864504542 0.42659136922 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.087277912307 0.0774707102158 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322199519249 0.312017818177 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119874730533 0.0698173142475 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.87684729064 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.82512315271 145% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 10.0 5.36822660099 186% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 14.657635468 109% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.