Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation
The recommendation that Pirouettes Ballet School is the best choice for any child is based on certain uncertain assumptions and requires a myriad of questions to be evaluated to decide whether it is reasonable.
The cardinal question to be taken into consideration in this case is whether all the children favor intensive program. For instance, certain kids might attend day boarding school and feel languished and tired after school. They will then prefer a less intensive and flexible program. Also, there may be some kids who are not passionate about Ballet or who are slow learners who are more inclined towards mild programs.
Even though Pirouettes school has the most intensive program, it is not known whether it is the most effective one. For instance, certain other schools may have a less intensive program but have an effective method of teaching. Also, it is necessary to determine if teachers from other dance schools have also danced at prestigious ballet companies all over the world. If they have , then this is not a valid criterion for categorizing Pirouettes Ballet School as the best one.
The students from Pirouettes Ballet school might have gone on to become professional dancers, but it is necessary to answer if they have attended only that school in their entire course of learning. It is highly plausible that they attended some other ballet school along with Pirouettes. Moreover, it is also unknown if students from other schools have also gone on to become professional dancers. If students from other schools have indeed become great professional dancers with less intensive training, then this proves that the efficiency of other schools is better than Pirouettes Ballet school.
Finally, even if it is true that the teachers of Pirouettes have danced in most prestigious companies while teachers from other schools have not, whether they can teach as efficiently needs to be determined. A person may be a great dancer, but may not have the required skills or patience for teaching.
Hence, for determining the validity of the recommendation, it is imperative to analyze the above mentioned questions which can weaken the argument. If this is not followed, many parents will end up making the wrong decision about which school is most suitable for their child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 375.0 441.139720559 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72698479513 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6819267735 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.823529412 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466033032782 0.218282227539 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158065560547 0.0743258471296 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963545896606 0.0701772020484 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241032604135 0.128457276422 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12771711635 0.0628817314937 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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