Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies.
In this argument, the author states that Pirouettes Ballet School is the most intensive program. Also, the teachers of this school have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world.Furthermore, the students from this school have become professional dancers with top dance companies. However, this argument is unconvincing and has many logical fallacies.
First of all, the author states that Pirouettes is the best choice for any child and has the most intensive dance program. But the author has not taken other fields in the consideration. What if the child has an interest in some other field. For example, if the child has an interest in science or sports then it doesn't become viable for the child to take admission in Pirouettes Ballet School. Furthermore, it doesn't create any helpful environment for the child if a child doesn't have the interest in learning dance.
Secondly, the author hasn't taken any reviews of teachers teaching skills. The teachers might have danced in the prestigious ballet companies but it is also possible that as a teacher they might not be as good as the performer. There should also be the evidence that provides teachers credibility at Pirouettes Ballet School Therefore, this argument is not fully plausible.
Finally, the author has mentioned that many of the Pirouettes Ballet School students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies. There is also a possibility that none of the students have gone to top dance companies recently or the ratio might have gone down. There is also a possibility that the statistics are not recent ones. Also, there no mention about the particular companies.
In conclusion, a careful reading of the argument shows that Pirouettes Ballet School one of the best dance schools and doesn't provide any evidence or statistics that suggests that this schools has other good things.Because of lack of other statistics and evidence available and it doesn't provide more information about the school's other departments, the arguemnet fails to convince by offering the weak evidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21828908555 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81103454776 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412979351032 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.8667153541 57.8364921388 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.70786347227 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485711993689 0.218282227539 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157544161353 0.0743258471296 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135968895538 0.0701772020484 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272473005725 0.128457276422 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101236567301 0.0628817314937 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.3799401198 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 98.500998004 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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