"Several factors indicate that KNOW radio can no longer succeed as a rock-and-roll music station. Consider, for example, that the number of people in our listening area over fifty years of age has increased dramatically, while our total number of listeners has declined. Also, music stores in our area report decreased sales of rock-and-roll music. Finally, continuous news stations in neighboring cities have been very successful. We predict that switching KNOW radio from rock-and-roll music to 24-hour news will allow the station to attract older listeners and make KNOW radio more profitable than ever."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The head of a radio station intends to change the KNOW radio station which always plays roch-and-roll to a 24-hour news station. However, this plan has lots of flawed. Because, There is a faulty conclusion about the listeners' statistics, The market sells, and the neighborhood news station.
Firstly, statistics about the listener shows a decrease. People tend to spend more and more time with family since everybody suffers from tight schedule. when people has some leisure time it is preferable for them to spending it with family instead of wasting time listening to music. For example, in last decade average people has five hours a day as a free time, but in today's life, this time is about two hours. So it is understandable why people choose to spend much more time with family. If the radio programmer wants to keep the listener, they should find the program more suitable for rest of family especially the young.
Secondly, nowaday's life people buy much of the life necessity from the online market like "eBay". These websites are much time to consume and in some cases, it is cheaper than the old market. therefore when people buy a few things from a music store. It's more likely because of advance in technology instead of dislike some product and artist.
Thirdly, each place has the common sense of interest between the inhabitants. So if some program has lots of attention in one place that does not mean this work the same in other places. For instance, the program like "VOA" and "BBC" have lots of viewer in my City however in "Esfahan" nobody knows about its canal and program. because Tehran is the metropolitical place so people watch this program.
In conclusion, For changing one program, There is need lots of think and consideration such as the reason why people dislike watch this program anymore, not just age group of viewer but also the age of family members and last but not least, some statics about the selling rate cannot show the popularity of one program, and also, popularity of one program in one place cannot grantee the popularity of that shows in other places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ad of a radio station intends to change the KNOW radio station which always plays roch-a...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'listeners'' or 'listener's'?
Suggestion: listeners'; listener's
... There is a faulty conclusion about the listeners statistics, The market sells, and the n...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... everybody suffers from tight schedule. when people has some leisure time it is pref...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ses, it is cheaper than the old market. therefore when people buy a few things from a mus...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...ses, it is cheaper than the old market. therefore when people buy a few things from a mus...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se of interest between the inhabitants. So if some program has lots of attention in o...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun viewer seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of viewers'.
Suggestion: lots of viewers
...apos;VOA' and 'BBC' have lots of viewer in my City however in 'Esfahan&apo...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...body knows about its canal and program. because Tehran is the metropolitical place so p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 362.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94475138122 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72922584773 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516574585635 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.1042697496 57.8364921388 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.70786347227 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149368597181 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466586190902 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409283006043 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832276804942 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339348571961 0.0628817314937 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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