20. Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
It is true even though students hold a degree from post-secondary education it is not easy to get a job. Moreover, in the job market, there are needs for certain fields and major. However, I do not like the idea that a lot of students change or choose their fields of study simply because it is more suitable for job market.
The outsiders want the students trained for their first job out of university, and the academics inside the system want the student educated for 50 years of self-fulfilment. The trouble is that the students want both. The conflict between each student's short-term and lon...
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