In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Development in an any field is a sequential process.Before doing any significant contribution to the particular field it is necessary to have knowledge of past development.Only after that people can get an idea about future development scope and thinking.
In modern days researchers and scientist are developing new technology , but if we go in the detail of their research we can find that the entire concept is based on some previous theory or ideas.For example consider automobile industry,nowdays in we are developing high technology cars.But we can not forget the significant contribution by our decendents.They were the one who invented the idea of moving cart.We are just modifying that concept with some established concept given by scientists.James watt was the one invened first engines without his noble invention we have not acheived high speed train etc.Albert Einstein could not have succeeded in the development of quantum mechanics theory without newtonain physics.He only get that idea after observation of failure of the newton's laws in some situation.
This past achievements concept is not only applicable to scientific invention.It is also applicable is some other fields.Every successful artist is inspired by some other artist.They get basic idea about skills from the past achiever only.Without baisc ideas he can not think in an exact required way.In sports , people get inspired by the former sportsman.After reading their past achievement ,struggle ,skills.We can get a rough idea about pathways to success.Mark Zuckerberg started social networking website facebook and we can see the success of this and it revitalize the concept of social networking website.But we can not forget that the concept of social networking is not a new concept,we have alreay seen in the past.Mark Zuckerberg could not have done this without the previously existed idea of social networking
To sum up, Humans have progressive learning skills and that require study about the past achievement to think futuristic. Above examples are giving lucid idea about how much is the importance of the study of the past achievement to think in a rational and practical way.
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Sentence: In modern days researchers and scientist are developing new technology , but if we go in the detail of their research we can find that the entire concept is based on some previous theory or ideas.For example consider automobile industry,nowdays in we are developing high technology cars.But we can not forget the significant contribution by our decendents.They were the one who invented the idea of moving cart.We are just modifying that concept with some established concept given by scientists.
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Sentence: James watt was the one invened first engines without his noble invention we have not acheived high speed train etc.Albert Einstein could not have succeeded in the development of quantum mechanics theory without newtonain physics.He only get that idea after observation of failure of the newton's laws in some situation.
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Sentence: This past achievements concept is not only applicable to scientific invention.It is also applicable is some other fields.Every successful artist is inspired by some other artist.They get basic idea about skills from the past achiever only.Without baisc ideas he can not think in an exact required way.In sports , people get inspired by the former sportsman.After reading their past achievement ,struggle ,skills.We can get a rough idea about pathways to success.Mark Zuckerberg started social
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Sentence: networking website facebook and we can see the success of this and it revitalize the concept of social networking website.But we can not forget that the concept of social networking is not a new concept,we have alreay seen in the past.Mark Zuckerberg could not have done this without the previously existed idea of social networking
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