"Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
Huan Tsang a Chinese visited India in 8th century, many Europeans went to Asian and American countries for trading and list is endless. Since pre-historic times, People have been traveling domestic or International locations for one or the other reasons. Some of them travel to get rid of their monotonous work while others travel for thrilling experiences, adventures, shopping, honeymoon, and explorations, religious or study visits. The developments in technology like Television, Internet take place everyday in contrast the increase in number of tourists worldwide certainly will not make touris...
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Thank you... one of my first
Thank you...
one of my first essay... dint track time. probably 45-50min..:)
Better in 30 minutes like a
Better in 30 minutes like a real exam.
Sentence: Since pre-historic times, People have been traveling domestic or International locations for one or the other reasons.
Error: pre-historic Suggestion: prehistoric
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Score: 6 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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No. of Words: 543 350
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No. of Different Words: 320 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.827 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.179 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 113 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 10.737 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.465 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
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