The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The argument in the issue states a debatable point, that instilling cooperation is the best way for society rather than instilling competition in young people who are the future leaders of industry and government. I vehemently agree with the stated argument. There is many a chance that competition will provoke ego and anger in the young people's mind. But cooperation instead develops a bond between them and it will help them grow both personally and the society.
In any organization or a company employer insist their employees to work as a team. They spend lot of money to develop chemistry...
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Sentence: From our infant age we would have read many stories with the moral 'Working as a team is a best way to achieve success'.
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