Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Heroes of society are those who have worked for the betterment of the society. Real definition of hero is a person who is loved and admired by society for his good deeds. He is a role model of youth, children, and loved one of elders. The claim states that these days it is not possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. And there is a ground of reason for this claim that the reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will be eventually get deteriorated. I do not agree to the claim as well as the reason for this claim.
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Sentence: It is a best means of information.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: It disturb the life of celebrities and represent them with their flaws.
Description: The fragment It disturb the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace disturb with verb, past tense
Sentence: A hero must be person who is helpul and kind to human race, a philanthropist.
Error: helpul Suggestion: helpful
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.871 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.265 7.5
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 461 350
No. of Characters: 1994 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.634 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.325 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.345 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.871 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.265 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.258 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.25 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.4 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5