Claim: Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Reason: It is inappropriate—and, perhaps, even cruel—to use public resources to fund the arts when people's basic needs are not being met.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claims is based.
Art enriches human life. It has been characterized in terms of mimesis, expression, communication of emotion, or other values. That is one of the reason we love art. However, I believe there are more important essential elements to live the life in society; Food, housing, and clothing. Without these needs, we will suffer from starvation and coldness. People need government to secure these needs. I doubt that people would enjoy arts while there are many people suffering from poverty.
Poverty always has been trigger that endangers nation. For instance, the continuous Arab revolutions in 2011,...
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