Claim:Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason:It is primarily in cities that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The statement that government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive may have ignored the fundamental importance of cultural diversity. Though maintaining the survival of major cities is one of the primary goals of government, but the mere fact, indicating culture traditions are preserved and generated in major cities, does not forcefully sustain the author’s conclusion.
It is true that the development and progress of a nation’s major cities, serving as an important indicator of its mainstream culture, significantly reflect the nat...
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Sentence: Due to its special status, Chinese government has to place a great deal of emphasize, including providing sufficient funding, on ensuring the city to function well as a cultural and historical symbol.
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No. of Words: 544 350
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No. of Different Words: 279 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.829 4.7
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