Conformity almost always leads to a deadening of individual creativity and energy.- GRE Issue 122
This statement about the impact of conformity on individual energy and creativity actually involves two distinct issues. In my view, the extent to which conformity stifles a person's energy depends primarily on the temperament of each individual, as well as on the goals toward which the person's energy is directed. However, I am in full agreement that conformity stifles creativity; indeed, in my view the two phenomena are mutually exdusive.
Whether conformity stifles individual energy depends on the individual person involved. Some people are conformists by nature. By this I mean that t...
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Sentence: However, I am in full agreement that conformity stifles creativity; indeed, in my view the two phenomena are mutually exdusive.
Error: exdusive Suggestion: exclusive
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