GRE issue:instead of requiring students to take courses in a varied of disciplines,college and universities should allow students to enroll only in those courses that prepare students for jobs in their chosen field.
University is not a place where students learn specialized course which matters to their future work, it's also an ivory tower where students of different backgrounds, hobbies, specialties could gather together to talk, discuss, and exchange their ideas to inspire each other. So, establish courses such as music appreciation, biology, humanities, art, and geography can create a broad horizon beyond their specialized field, affording them a chance to see the big picture of human knowledge and understand their place in the progress of seek for truth.
Due to the explosive growth of human knowl...
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Sentence: Those learning different courses will have greater possibility that connect the dots, said by Steve jobs, someday when the confronting the specific problems left by those leaders in only one field.
Description: The fragment that connect the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace connect with verb, past tense
Sentence: Of course, many options are available such as going to the museum, theatre, or gym, listening to the music, doing the garden, playing cards, chatting with friends, and trying to write a novel.
Error: theatre Suggestion: theater
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 544 350
No. of Characters: 2746 1500
No. of Different Words: 299 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.829 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.048 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.611 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 196 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 157 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 103 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.451 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5