The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves
Life today has completely turned around, in comparison with the previous era. People have started living their lives on edges. Modernization have taken over the traditional customs, rites and rituals. Mechanization have made the human to work effortlessly. Time has been evolved and has welcomed us all to this new century with both ups and downs. It was times, when people had to travel for hours together to reach their destination and it’s the time now where it takes not more than 24 hours to reach any corner of the place. This pacing generation had not only brought us many advantages but few...
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Modernization have taken over the traditional customs, rites and rituals. Mechanization have made the human to work effortlessly.
Suggestion: Modernization has taken over the traditional customs, rites and rituals. Mechanization has made the human to work effortlessly.
Sentence: Their own blood are constructing a bridge, in order to have freedom and a sense of relief because they feel that their ancestors are just a burden.
Description: The fragment Their own blood is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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No. of Words: 659 350
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 36 15
No. of Words: 659 350
No. of Characters: 3085 1500
No. of Different Words: 331 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.067 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.681 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.493 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 194 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 93 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.306 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.86 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.243 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.39 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5