A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Children are the future of any nation.They should get very good quality basic education , not only for their own future but also for the nation's future.They are the one who will be responsible for development of the nation.Every person of the nation has the same responsibilty toward the development of the nation so primary education of the every child should be same.

Same national curriculum helps student in many ways.They can freely change their school at any point of time during high school without any fear of curriculum.For example, government employee always get transfer from one place to other place for very short time period.If curriculam is not same throughout the country, these children will have to face new and unfamiliar curriculums everywhere they go. This will make it difficult for them to cope up with the requirements of a new curriculum and they will be at a great disadvantage.Due to this situation some time parents also get streesed ,because they know that if they will move to new place their children will face alot of difficulty .

Same national curriculum also help in to conduct fair and unbiase entrance exam for college. For example, in India after school student have to pass entrance exam to get admission in college.Suppose country does not have same national curiculum.Then administration of the entrance exam will also face difficulty to conduct unbiased exam.Different place have their own curriculum and they can not follow one curriculum. So in that situation some specific place student will get more benefit due to their curriculum and entrance exam will be biased towards them.

From points i have mentioned above i can definitely say that same national curriculum is required until they enter college.But i will also say that school should also give some opportunity to student to select the courses at some extent according their interest.

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Sentence: Children are the future of any nation.They should get very good quality basic education , not only for their own future but also for the nation's future.They are the one who will be responsible for development of the nation.Every person of the nation has the same responsibilty toward the development of the nation so primary education of the every child should be same.
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Sentence: Children are the future of any nation.They should get very good quality basic education , not only for their own future but also for the nation's future.They are the one who will be responsible for development of the nation.Every person of the nation has the same responsibilty toward the development of the nation so primary education of the every child should be same.
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Sentence: Same national curriculum helps student in many ways.They can freely change their school at any point of time during high school without any fear of curriculum.For example, government employee always get transfer from one place to other place for very short time period.If curriculam is not same throughout the country, these children will have to face new and unfamiliar curriculums everywhere they go.
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Sentence: This will make it difficult for them to cope up with the requirements of a new curriculum and they will be at a great disadvantage.Due to this situation some time parents also get streesed ,because they know that if they will move to new place their children will face alot of difficulty .
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Sentence: Same national curriculum also help in to conduct fair and unbiase entrance exam for college.
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Sentence: For example, in India after school student have to pass entrance exam to get admission in college.Suppose country does not have same national curiculum.Then administration of the entrance exam will also face difficulty to conduct unbiased exam.Different place have their own curriculum and they can not follow one curriculum.
Error: curiculum Suggestion: curriculum

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