Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.

It should be the humans first, to realize the conservation of forest. One should try to protect their own state from causing myriad of damages. Yet there are few, who prefer to follow forcefully the laws amended by the government because of their unmanly nature. It was once, a decision made by Dr K.M.Munshi in the year 1950 who initiated Van Mahotsav which was a tree-planting festival celebrated in India on every 1st week of July. Till date those one week, right from a lad to an elderly would be part of the festival and try to plant minimum number of trees in their city in order to keep the c...

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Sentence: Therefore it should be the duty of the government to surpass certain rules which is for the betterment of the society.
Description: The fragment certain rules which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are

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No. of Characters: 3303 1500
No. of Different Words: 331 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.127 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 106 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 70 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.29 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.113 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.422 0.50
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