People who make decisions based on emotion justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.-write an issue task on it.
Emotion contradict with brain response and logical decision.It can be said indisputably,those who are stand on their emotion only they never see the light of success.People sometimes do not cogitate and give importance to their baseless emotion.Consequences it makes him penitent for the life time.So giving importance on emotion is mundane and they are said to be a poor decision maker.
Now acclaiming emotion.It may be various depending on situation.it may be positive and negative.Some become arrogant,stubborn or some become dependent on what is their mind saying.Such type of behavior are impetous.Some fail to become sedulity because they are giving importance their anger.In the long run they suffer because of making poor decision.
Although some people are said to be astute,they also give importance to their mind and emotion on certain circumstances.This convey a lot of limitation so that he abscond.It is not a wise decision to be an epitomize of emotional person. Sometimes hackneyed decision can fetch a colossal strom what can be a disaster to him.In family life husband and wife should compromise themselves.So that there exist a bonding which consolidate the relationship and thus other member are also benefited.But sometimes they make contentious.By giving importance to their banal emotion such situation can be a result debacle.They make invective and people take deride of seeing their bicker.
It is obviously said that,people who give prominence on emotion they are loser.Sometimes people do not control their anger and anger is the ultimate situation of being loser.
So,it is one who think everything logically he/she get bestow from nature automatically.
So,it is a keen decision take a long breathe and give time to take a proper decision for any type of reason.It should not be done hastenly.
Finally,it is very true people who make decision emotionally they suffer in the long run and that is a poor decision.
Sentence: Emotion contradict with brain response and logical decision.It can be said indisputably,...
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Sentence: Some fail to become sedulity because they are giving importance their anger.
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Sentence: It is not a wise decision to be an epitomize of emotional person.
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Sentence: Sometimes hackneyed decision can fetch a colossal strom what can be a disaster to him.
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Sentence: It should not be done hastenly.
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Sentence Length SD: 4.792 7.5
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No. of Words: 335 350
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