You are herePeople's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.


aarkadatta's picture

By aarkadatta - Posted on 06 July 2012

Essay topic: 

People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

People's behavior is the outcome of several metaphysical process. It may include socio economic condition, personal stand and acceptance in the society . Forceful implementation of law and order may shape peoples behavior but not absolutely necessary. Sometimes they are simply determined not to follow any imposed restriction.So ultimately the decisions are upto the people that how they behave.

If we consider the force which may have impact to change the behavior ,it can be broadly classified into three distinct categories. They are government pressure , social pressure and pressure from their peer groups. These three categories somehow shape one's behavior or at least provide a footprint upon its behavior. But again they may accept that or reject those impressions.

Government pressure is related with maintain law and order . This should be maintained for the convenience of other people . For example one should not talk in mobile phone while driving . That is the rule but if anyone simply want to go against it there are some laws to prevent that action. So sometimes government rules are necessary to shape their habits which gradually reflects in their behavior.

Social pressure is related with maintaining several social regulation . Obliging social rules is completely depends upon peoples own choice. Because they are not mandatory to live in society. However maintaing few of them will surely something payback to society as nobody in the society not be able to live alone. Live and let live is the motivation to oblige the social rules.

Finally peer groups has the considerable power to shape ones behavior. Peer groups are the collection of our nearest and dearest ones. So it is high probability that behavior of people are affected by their feedback. However one actually chooses peer group according their behavior. For example if someone like to smoke and drink he or she will choose that group which has the similar quality. So peer group shapes behavior but the direction depends upon whom they choose as their peer.

There are some other forces which may change their habits . It is the habit of one which gradually reflects in their behaviour. Force can be a motivation to follow those rules and regulation but it depends ultimately upon the people who choose to follow those which ultimately shapes their behavior.

Average: 6.3 (4 votes)
Tags
This essay topic by other users:
Post date Users Rates More about the essay Sticky
9 weeks 4 days ago vp.sumit
Read full essay
25 weeks 4 hours ago saharpouya
Read full essay
1 year 2 weeks ago mrunal pagnis
Read full essay
1 year 6 weeks ago maryam2900
Read full essay
1 year 30 weeks ago salmankarani
Read full essay
2 years 5 weeks ago Doan Nguyen
Read full essay
3 years 4 weeks ago anam
Read full essay
3 years 4 weeks ago anam
Read full essay
More essays by this user:
Looking for speaking partner/tutor/chat? Join the instant conversation now!
    
Something about you
Choose a nickname and enter at least one ID (Skype, MSN, QQ, ICQ or Yahoo) if you want to be listed!
Registered users only
Loading...
(94 users watching; 1 users on the list)
People online
Nickname Sex L Country Favorite topics Contact

"In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years."Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and sylar sticky icon
Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa nargess1981
Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. ashni sticky icon
If a goal is worthy,.then any means taken to attain it are justifiable A.R.Ramya sticky icon
The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central benjamin8451 sticky icon
The following appeared in a recommendation from the President of the Amburg Chamber of Commerce."Last October, the city of Belleville installed high-intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined almost immediately. The Vanan sticky icon
People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience. - GRE Issue 116 kennedy.J sticky icon
Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate. faye121 sticky icon
claim: government must ensure that their major cities receive financial support they need in order to thrive.reason: it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. vishlesh patel
A recent sales study indicates that the consumption of seafood dishes in bay city restaurants has increased by 30 percent during past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose speciality is seafood. Moreover, the majority of sai preeti sticky icon

Term
Although innovations such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning. - GRE Issue 119 six11 GMAT/GRE
Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a Thupten Tsering GMAT/GRE
Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals. myyid68 GMAT/GRE
74The president of Grove College has recommended that the college abandon its century-old tradition of all-female education and begin admitting men. Pointing to other all-female colleges that experienced an increase in applications after adopting coeducat aloha871111 GMAT/GRE
Television is entirely democratic in that its content is controlled by what the people want. angel GMAT/GRE
Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. wasainika17 GMAT/GRE
Argument Essay:->The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc."A recent study of our customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which ensures smartaquarius10 GMAT/GRE
The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc."A recent study of our customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which ensures that our socks ar cuijin1 sticky icon GMAT/GRE
All results of publicly funded scientific studies should be made available to the general public free of charge. Scientific journals that charge a subscription or newsstand price are profiting unfairly. maryam2900 GMAT/GRE
The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc."A recent study of our customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which ensures that our socks ar aaish GMAT/GRE Argument Task

Term
The following appeared in a memo at XYZ company."When XYZ lays off employees, it pays Delany Personnel Firm to offer those employees assistance in creating résumés and developing interviewing skills, if they so desire. Laid-off employees have benefited gr nepal808 sticky icon GMAT/GRE Argument Task
1. Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, ar essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Argument Task
125. Some people claim that a nation’s government should preserve its wilderness areas in their natural state. Others argue that these areas should be developed for potential economic gain. essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement sonu123 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
78 The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food distribution company with food storage warehouses in several cities."Recently, we signed a contract with the Fly-Away Pest Control Company to provide pest control services at our fast-f essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Argument Task
The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.“According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any sonu123 GMAT/GRE Argument Task
Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing sheida GMAT/GRE Issue Task
On 16: 86. Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgement. essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
The following memorandum was sent to the President of Arbayo Manufacturing from the human resources director.“In order to reduce the turnover expense to the company associated with recruiting, hiring, and training, Arbayo should adopt a program of screeni sonu123 GMAT/GRE Argument Task
The highest goal for life or career is not striving to compete, but learning to cooperate.Discuss whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Use relevant reasons and examples to support your point of view. In developing and supporting your position sonu123 GMAT/GRE Issue Task

The following appeared in a memo at XYZ company."When XYZ lays off employees, it pays Delany Personnel Firm to offer those employees assistance in creating résumés and developing interviewing skills, if they so desire. Laid-off employees have benefited gr nepal808 sticky icon GMAT/GRE Argument Task
The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. anubhav1989 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things jensonsv GMAT/GRE Issue Task
The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement above and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should c bahrami GMAT/GRE Issue Task
1. Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, ar essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Argument Task
Too much emphasis is placed on role models. Instead of copying others, people should learn to think and act independently and thus make the choices that are best for them. essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
Question authority. Only by questioning accepted wisdom can we advance our understanding of the world bahrami GMAT/GRE Issue Task
125. Some people claim that a nation’s government should preserve its wilderness areas in their natural state. Others argue that these areas should be developed for potential economic gain. essay6.0 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement sonu123 GMAT/GRE Issue Task
The following appeared in an e-mail sent by the marketing director of the Classical Shakespeare Theatre of Bardville."Over the past ten years, there has been a 20 percent decline in the size of the average audience at Classical Shakespeare Theatre product anubhav007 GMAT/GRE Argument Task
essayE-rater's picture

Sentence: Forceful implementation of law and order may shape peoples behavior but not absolutely necessary.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to peoples and behavior

Sentence: Government pressure is related with maintain law and order .
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to with and maintain

Sentence: Finally peer groups has the considerable power to shape ones behavior.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to ones and behavior

Sentence: It may include socio economic condition, personal stand and acceptance in the society .
Error: socio Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Sometimes they are simply determined not to follow any imposed restriction.So ultimately the decisions are upto the people that how they behave.
Error: upto Suggestion: up to

Sentence: However maintaing few of them will surely something payback to society as nobody in the society not be able to live alone.
Error: payback Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: maintaing Suggestion: maintain

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.074 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.249 7.5
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1928 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.074 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.527 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.074 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.249 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.63 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5

To prevent automated spam submissions leave this field empty.