People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
All Homo sapiens have a tendency of getting influenced by the external ambience, humans as such are social animals and are bounded by the restrictions of getting emotionally attached to the people whom they interact and spend time with. It is hard to survive on our own living a life of ascetic or a monk , even they are influenced by spiritual powers of religion if not physical pleasures. So strongly acknowledging the fact human course of actions is a direct influence of the forces which influence them.
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Sentence: All Homo sapiens have a tendency of getting influenced by the external ambience, humans as such are social animals and are bounded by the restrictions of getting emotionally attached to the people whom they interact and spend time with.
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Sentence: Taking instance of my own country India, every year there are lakhs of students who are jobless and the main reason is that they never realised their inner desires, their passion and field of interest.
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