People's behvavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

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People's behvavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

Behavior is likely to be influenced by forces and sometimes is a natural instinct in which different individuals are born with. Prof. Wole Soyinka, says, " People are naturally born with internal bahavior that makes them to react to different situations in different ways". It is likely to say that forces may be involved in the way a person behaves.

Let's talk about some individual's who are born with inherent malevolent attitude. It is likely to consider that they are influenced by demonic forces, or are they having such behavior because they feel its the right thing to do by hurting people. For example, in the world today, when considering such act we talk about the terrorist. This people derive joy in hurting people. Some times they are brought up from an environment that believes in terrorist activity. For instance, the late infamous terrorist Osama Benladin, who terrorised America in those days. Is he influenced by forces, or is he doing that in other to avenge what America did to him? Another aspect of this kind is the Bostom bombing. This two guys known as Tarmaler and his younger brother. They set up a bomb in Bostom in other to demoralise the event. All Arab people (Islamic individuals) they believe that if they are involve in terrorist activity, that will make them to go to heaven.

Some people are been drived by forces in the way they behave. The pastors call this kind of behavior "Demonic possession". Individual doing what he or she does not want to do. Let's talk about people who rape young girls conspicuously , or the one's that mugg citizens in public. In New York city of America, many gang stars are living in the area, behaving in all sort of manner. Some are subversive towards the government and organisation they are into. Killing of fellow citizens because of society caste.

In politics, people behave differently based on their God father. Such cases happen in Nigeria. An elected person can not do what he or she wants to do. They all behave in a slavish way. Turning into sycophants and toadies. This kind of behavior is influenced by people and not an inherent one. For example, the Local Government Chairman of Uguta, is highly influence by those he is subsidiary to. Embezzling societies money, lives a callous live, and noncharlant attitute towards his people, and even turned into a tyrant. In addition, some individuals are pushed by forces, such as in colleges and higher institutions, students do all source of things. Likke those in cult and gang stars are all been pushed by forces.

However, a person's behavior depends on his ability to control his emotions. Some are unable to control the forces that drive them.

In summary, individual way of life can be a kind of instinct or the environment they are born into. Some are based on religious purposes. Such as the two brothers who were involved in boston bombing. Whatever that drives people to behave depends on the individual. Some are serviles, pretending in different ways in order to get something as an advantage. Whatever this behavior may be, it should be noted that forces also plays a role in this kind of situation.

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Sentence: For instance, the late infamous terrorist Osama Benladin, who terrorised America in those days.
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Sentence: They set up a bomb in Bostom in other to demoralise the event.
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