Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
I am agree with the people those who believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Art is a very vast terminology it includes things which are persons own creations examples:- a wooden basket and an earthen pot made by a common village person, a painting and a craft etc. Funding is required for the growth of arts because the peoples who involved in making are a poor person and they are selling it for survival of their livelihood.
Since, most of these arts work is done by a common village person so government should help poor person by funding, establishing a shop where they can sell their arts and for transportation of their arts from village to big cities. Arts also represent culture of any country. Government should involve in growth of country culture by funding of the arts and make it available throughout the world. By transporting arts government could establish a proper integrity or interconnection among the people inside the country like in India and also outside the country. Here, specially country name India is mentioned because India has a mixed culture, within the country itself people lives in one region is unaware of work of other regions people. Thus, transportation of arts within the country could maintain integrity.
Most of the time arts are very beautiful and people living in big city are very much interested in it. If government funding would not be there then cities would not have proper arts gallery and town’s people will have to go to the specific places. In other way we can say that it is breaking the integrity of a nation.
In summary, government funding is very much required to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people and it is also maintaining integrity of the arts within the country.
Sentence: Art is a very vast terminology it includes things which are persons own creations examples:- a wooden basket and an earthen pot made by a common village person, a painting and a craft etc. Funding is required for the growth of arts because the peoples who involved in making are a poor person and they are selling it for survival of their livelihood.
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