Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives
The person who works for people , savvy need for people that is called the political leaders. so political leaders should be yield in there vacation life. i wholely believe that to be effective political leaders flexible in there opinion and abandon principle for sake to compromise. that provide help society as well as nation also.
The pithy part is political leader work for people. peoples mind is always lassitude. Ex if people want garden in there ward some people want playground ( boys). so leader have change there opinion in aspect of problem. the political leader yield in there in opinion also help to allure all kind of people in society. which is help him to sustain there political party.
The some time in election ward has been change. so people in ward change. political leader has to think all kind of people in society such as muslim, hindu,punjabi etc. for ex if leader has privious ward is hindu minority, after partita ion of ward it move to muslim minority the leader has to change there aspect view of society. such kind of thing help him in there political carrier.
The youngster, women and men all three kind of people live in society. political leader has to think all point of view to manage people. ex for youngster need college, playground and class in there ward, women needs security in there area. such type facility have to keep in mind of political leaders.
From above point yield, but some time unyield is much beneficial. Ex one particular principle they have much focus on that principle. leader can do much more work effectively. Ex if political leaders buttereres to hindi community, so he can construct temple of various type of god. also make every festival more and more ornamently. In this point of view there no need baffle.
From above point evevn though there are certain disadvantage of yielding, but why not disadvantage explain above. so we conclude more yielding political leaders has plenty of vantage point in there social life. such as adapt every possible situation make him easy long way to go. hence political leaders should yield in there social life.
Sentence: Ex if people want garden in there ward some people want playground boys. so leader have change there opinion in aspect of problem. the political leader yield in there in opinion also help to allure all kind of people in society. which is help him to sustain there political party.
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Sentence: The person who works for people , savvy need for people that is called the political leaders. so political leaders should be yield in there vacation life. i wholely believe that to be effective political leaders flexible in there opinion and abandon principle for sake to compromise. that provide help society as well as nation also.
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Sentence: The pithy part is political leader work for people. peoples mind is always lassitude.
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Sentence: From above point evevn though there are certain disadvantage of yielding, but why not disadvantage explain above. so we conclude more yielding political leaders has plenty of vantage point in there social life. such as adapt every possible situation make him easy long way to go. hence political leaders should yield in there social life.
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