In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes littl

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In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase. The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The argument states that "Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase" because the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. This argument is not logically convincing because author did not consider some crucial assumptions which made his argument totally unsubstantiated.

First assumption argument assumes is that complaints from residents for cleaning up mason river is because they want to use it for their favorite recreational activities. Author did not give any reason for this assumption. For instance, take residential houses near mason river because city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining mason river due to which quality of the river's water and the river's smell spoiled and its smell became more worse. Now if a residential has to live in territory of mason river, they can not live because its not viable for lives to survive, they will suffocate because of river's bad smell. Obviously majority will go for complains against city park department which is responsible for maintaining mason river. But author assumed it is differently that they want to use it for recreational activities which lead to flaw in argument.

Second assumption argument assumes is that residential people are going for rarely use of recreational activities. Author did not give any reason for this assumption. May be there are several rivers other than mason river in city. residential people found those rivers more comforting and convenience and they were doing their recreational activities in those river than doing it in mason river. So even if city park start maintaining mason river residential people will not use it for recreational activities which is totally contradicting argument that Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase.

ultimately, argument is completely unsound. evidence in favor of argument that Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase is little supporting. Argument can be strengthened by taking assumptions which are states above that residential people use only mason river for recreational activities and people complained because they want to maintain mason river for continuance recreational activities.

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Sentence: Now if a residential has to live in territory of mason river, they can not live because its not viable for lives to survive, they will suffocate because of river's bad smell.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to its and not

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argument 1 -- not OK

argument 2 -- not OK
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flaws:
1. The arguments are not right on the point.

2. No. of Different Words: 146 200

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: ? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 352 350
No. of Characters: 1859 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.281 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.838 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.811 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.448 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

can you elaborate
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 146 200

I did not understand ??

I want to ask one more question that overall no. of words makes a excellent score like i pointed out only two assumptions. If I point out three or four then can i get better score rather than pointing out two assumptions and less no. of words???

No. of Different Words: 146 200 means: 200 Different Words are ideal, while you only have 146 Different Words.

Basically, for issue essays, better to have 450+ words, for argument essays, 400+ words, then you won't have this flaw.

better to have 3 assumptions.

and better to have 5 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

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