Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Teachers are the foundations of our knowledge – enhancing knowledge and molding individuals to be well prepared to enter a challenging professional environment. Academic performance is based on two criteria’s; a teacher’s ability to coherently transfer information to the student and the students ability to comprehend what is being taught with great interest and motivation. Thus, a poor performance cannot be blamed entirely on a teacher. In this regard, a teacher’s salary should not depend on a student’s academic performance because teachers are not the scapegoats for poor performanc...
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Sentence: In this regard, a teacher's salary should not depend on a student's academic performance because teachers are not the scapegoats for poor performance, teachers are already underpaid workers, and pragmatically every student will not showcase highest performance.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to showcase and highest. showcase is not a verb.
Sentence: Just because a minority in the classroom did not showcase high performance, it is no reason to blame the teacher by reducing his wages.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to showcase and high
Sentence: Thus, in conclusion, a student performance isn't an indicator of the teachers ability to teach and this should not have an impact on their salaries.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to teachers and ability
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