To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
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The society is the place were people of different of different charecters mingle together and go on in their in day to day life.A sciety will not be called as a good society all in a single day it may take year after year to call it as a good society.And it depends mostly in the hands of people acts.A society is considered as a bad society only because of the people in that society.
In a society there are people who lives in cities and there are people who lives in villages. Life style,dressing,food,approching,education,job and trend are the main aspects of a particular society this can be different from urban and rural areas.So I belive in the extent that one must not onle study the major cities but shuould also study the rural areas to know the charecterstics of a society.
Day to day life of urban people and rural changes.Urban people will be always in a hurry to go to their day to day work on week days but they will be in a complete rest on the week ends.So their food,lifestyle changes here.But rural people do not have day called weekday or a week end they should work all the day but not in a hurry because it purly depends on agriculture.Their people get fresh food items and where as city people has a rare chance of getting fresh item but the city people will always have a more updated knowledge in what ever new technologies introduced than village people.
Cities have different type of administration in government and villages have different type of administration government.So rules framed for villages will be framed for the goodness of village people life style and earning which may be different form city. Government tax,subsidy,bills also may differ.Architecture of the bulding also varies from villages to cities.
A socity can be devoloped only when people in different departments work together.A socity is not only devoloped by the docters,engineers,industialist and etc but it also in the hands of formers who work the society’s food consumption.Think of a society where every industries are there but does not have a single peace of land to cultivate food for the people who work in those industries? So I strongly believe that not only the major cities are important to society even small village also plays a role in it and it also contributes for the society.So as a whole we should not alone study major cities of a society but the other places should also be considered.
Sentence: The society is the place were people of different of different charecters mingle together and go on in their in day to day life.A sciety will not be called as a good society all in a single day it may take year after year to call it as a good society.And it depends mostly in the hands of people acts.A society is considered as a bad society only because of the people in that society.
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Sentence: Cities have different type of administration in government and villages have different type of administration government.So rules framed for villages will be framed for the goodness of village people life style and earning which may be different form city.
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Sentence: The society is the place were people of different of different charecters mingle together and go on in their in day to day life.A sciety will not be called as a good society all in a single day it may take year after year to call it as a good society.And it depends mostly in the hands of people acts.A society is considered as a bad society only because of the people in that society.
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Sentence: A socity can be devoloped only when people in different departments work together.A socity is not only devoloped by the docters,engineers,industialist and etc but it also in the hands of formers who work the society's food consumption.Think of a society where every industries are there but does not have a single peace of land to cultivate food for the people who work in those industries?
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