"To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities."
From the dilapidated mud houses and shambles of straw and hay to magnificent concrete mansions; from tattered clothes and slapdash fashion to elegant dresses and suave mannerism; from rustic food to savory culinary delicacies; I have seen it all. It sure seems like a long journey through the diverse society that we are all a part of but, it is fortunately limited to the ambit of a single major city. It is not sophistry when I tell you that the most diverse population lives in the major cities of the country. Living in the cobweb of busy routines and tight schedules is the very core of the soci...
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Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Better to have 5 paragraphs.
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 435 350
No. of Characters: 2167 1500
No. of Different Words: 250 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.567 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.982 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.923 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.705 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.441 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5