To Understand The Most Important Characteristics Of A Society, One Must Study Its Major Cities
A society is nothing but the interrelationship amongst all people living in it. It works on a set of predefined rules and regulations etched out by its progenitors. A society gives birth to culture. The society does not have well defined boundries like the cities and countries. But a city surely gives a picture of the people living in it to some extent but not completely. A society has various shades and colours which cannot be studied only by its major cities.
If one attempts to study the society of a prodigious country like India, one will find huge diversity in its culture. It is a mult...
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Sentence: So in conclusion I can say that to study the important characteristics of a society study its people, its the people which make a society instead of its cities.
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Sentence: If you compare cities like Delhi and Mumbai with the cities of the eastern seven sister statesArunachal Pradesh, Nagaland, Sikkim, etc. one finds huge differences amongst the thinking, way of life, social conventions, etc. amongst them.
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Sentence: Where the amalgamation is not there, a discernable number of cultures can be seen.
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Sentence: All the major mueseums and art centers are in the cities itself.
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