The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.

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The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.


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Sentence: The criminal goes free to perpetrates more such acts.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and perpetrates

Sentence: Hence it becomes difficult for the society to trust the authoritys actions.
Error: authoritys Suggestion: authority's

Sentence: So if the society doesnt rebuke such decisons, it can become a scourge for them in the future.
Error: decisons Suggestion: decisions

Sentence: Those in power are actually there because of the societys approval to take decisions on behalf of the whole society.
Error: society Suggestion: society

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Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.

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