2. People who make decisions based on emotions and justify those with logic afterwards are poor decision makers
I agree with author people who take any decisions when they are emotionally involved tend to make mistake because he or she wont be having stable mind. Emotions are very dangerous if we don't have control over them then later we have to pay for our behavior.
Emotions are human’s part of life, without emotions humans are just like robots. Robots has no emotion they just process according the instruction given in his system but humans are not like that because of emotions human shows his different face to the society. Emotions like bliss, depression, anxiety, fear and many more and all the decisions we take when we emotionally involved might not be wrong its based on person how he respond to it. If he takes in positive way like failure is stepping stone of success then the outcome is different, if he take in negative way like i am hopeless and i cannot achieve anything then it will be wrong decisions.
For example, when student has failed in his exam he or she will be scared of their parents or their future so they will be depressed and fill their mind with negative thoughts which leads to suicide. This depression is because of emotion of fear they are to not ready to face the circumstance instead they think whatever, decision they took when they are highly emotional is correct and follow according to that.
Crime and murder in the cities are mainly because of the emotion. When people are sad or angry they take hasty decisions without thinking twice whether its right or wrong. Due to their anger they try to take someone life which put them into jail, instead of that if they think logically without their emotions involved they wont make any hasty or wrong decisions. Once they realized that they took wrong decisions because of there emotions they will regret that decisions till their life.
Many successful people never achieved in their first attempt but still they have not got involved in their emotions because they know how to control. For example Steve jobs before his successful invention of Apple there are many unsuccessful story which he has gone through but he never made his decisions when he was emotionally involved he controlled his emotion and made logical decisions.
In conclusion emotions have positive outcome and negative outcome its based on human how we receive it. But whatever the outcome is we should never make our decisions when we are emotionally involved then regret later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mind. Emotions are very dangerous if we dont have control over them then later we ha...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...ss then the outcome is different, if he take in negative way like i am hopeless and ...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ferent, if he take in negative way like i am hopeless and i cannot achieve anythi...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in negative way like i am hopeless and i cannot achieve anything then it will be...
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Line 8, column 242, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'stories'?
Suggestion: stories
...on of Apple there are many unsuccessful story which he has gone through but he never ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84964200477 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38959482318 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463007159905 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8680508153 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196981846996 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819131117099 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595409172319 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12216576088 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323479445666 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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