In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Pursuing an endeavor demands great passion and enthusiasm. Mere attempt takes you one step closer towards success, but it takes a lot more to actually achieve it. As per human nature, we don't even put faith in a person unless we know his background information. Likewise, before attempting to enter a field its always better to do some background digging and study its foundation and basics. In the process, one comes across the various advancements and achievements that has happened in the field. For example, a cricket enthusiast would surely go through the profile and achievements of Sachin Tendulkar before starting his career as a cricketer. These past achievements prove to be helpful in many ways such as they provide inspiration , provides vast knowledge of the field, ways and methods to achieve success and even boosting the passion to take these achievements to a level higher or come up with new ones.
Though the influence of these achievements prove to be beneficial in many ways, but it is not the sole factor that engenders significant contribution in that field. Basics are the building blocks of anything. If one is clear and strong in his basics in a particular field then even when there is no backing of any influential past achievement to bolster his efforts, he can surely make significant contribution purely on the basis of his strong foundation, enthusiasm and rigorous efforts. Taking about Wright brothers, they were able to make a significant contribution in the field of aerospace by igniting the idea of flying machine as well as bringing it to reality by invention of the first successful flying aircraft. They had no previous achievements or success stories to influence them in their endeavor. Passion, ideas , basic knowledge and continual efforts were sufficient to make it possible for them to write their own first of its kind success story. Mere ideas have given birth to so many inventions like electricity, telephone, transport. If we talk about the past experiences then is it that success is definitely guaranteed if one is aware of all the past achievements in his field of endeavor? The answer is no. Thus, the claim that it is impossible to contribute significantly without being influenced by past achievements is slightly over the top.
Influence of past achievements would surely provide a guidance to proceed in a certain direction as well as inspiration but a person backed by strong foundation of basic knowledge, enthusiasm and creative thinking can undoubtedly contribute in his field of endeavor in a significant way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, likewise, so, then, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10401891253 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00280468665 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1601669129 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.944444444 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421139888896 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118058088902 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108051172818 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285802311252 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117570036705 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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