The popular opinions are crucial to the leaders’ decisions because leaders need to know all requirements and concerns from their people. However, the popular opinions usually change all the time and successful leaders should not quickly and easily change their minds according to regular shifts in popular opinion. I will describe the reasons for this argument in the following essay.
First, unlike the frequent change in popular opinion, the great projects need constant directions for a long period to succeed. For example, building a dam needs five to ten years for planning and construction. Although, the project is supported by the majority of people in the area at the beginning to provide water for the agriculture, some people may later want their government to stop the project to preserve the forest area instead. If the leader easily follows the change in people’s opinion and stops the project, the country will lose a lot of money and time that have been spent for this project in the past without any return. The great leader should do his best in making the decision at the first time and believe in that decision. Otherwise, the great projects will never be finished and there will be no concrete benefit to people.
Second, popular opinions are not always right. Most people do not have ability to think thoroughly in every idea. Consequently, they sometimes change their opinions without any reasonable cause. People may propose the government to immediately reduce the tax in the period that the country’s economy goes down and people lose their incomes. In this circumstance, if the leader does not think carefully and reduces the tax, the country may not have enough budget for the economic stimulation and the situation can be getting worse. The successful leader should think about all the effects form the tax reduction and maintain the proper tax rate in order to solve the country’s crisis.
Although some people may argue that leaders should listen to the change in popular opinions. This may be true but it is not necessary that leaders have to follow all those opinion. The leaders have to consider all the possible effects that could happen from the decision. They can also gather the opinion from many specialists in their team in order to provide the best things to the country. The leaders should reject some popular opinions if they can prove that the opinions will not benefit the country in a long term.
All in all, I strongly believe that the leaders who want to accomplish in their tasks should not be easily and quickly influenced by the shifts in popular opinions. They should have a constant direction as long as they have enough supported reasons.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') or 'people' or repetitive words like 'great leaders' as the subject of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 453 350
No. of Characters: 2200 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.613 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.356 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 173 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.31 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.508 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to solve the country's crisis. Although some people may argue that leaders shou...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opinion' or 'those opinions'?
Suggestion: this opinion; those opinions
...cessary that leaders have to follow all those opinion. The leaders have to consider all the p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234592445328 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.141153081511 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0715705765408 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0636182902584 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0318091451292 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101391650099 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0198807157058 0.0406280797675 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54618321986 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357852882704 0.030933414821 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.143141153082 0.0997080785238 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0417495029821 0.0249443105267 167% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00596421471173 0.0148568991511 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2720.0 2732.02544248 100% => OK
No of words: 453.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00441501104 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39293598234 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282560706402 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169977924945 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0860927152318 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54618321986 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443708609272 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.0253020301 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5909090909 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6180785517 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.636363636 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.674092028746 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 48.8469797311 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.50420168067 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410768600287 0.391690518653 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150698819116 0.123202303941 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10606992272 0.077325440228 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.555398851329 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204143451817 0.149214159877 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182546086067 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101656949495 0.0892212321368 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.542662716406 0.385218514788 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0657952510216 0.0692045440612 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31000299028 0.275328986314 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044697294645 0.0653680567796 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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