The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
A remarkable ability that separates humans from other animals is their ability to think, to percieve emotions. It is this quality that instills in them a sense of cooperation or competition. Any leader can be termed as the most influential and successful if he/she is better than others. This throws light on the fact that to be better than others, one must compete with them. Healthy competition is imperative for good leadership.
Competition will contemporaries ensures that the leader follows a morally appropriate path. For instance, a leader in a firm cannot embezzle for personal profit because he/she knows that if caught, his/her competitors will be given the post. Hence, the animosity with competitors acts as a driving force for the leader to give his/her best with completer determination.
Moreover, healthy competition gives way to better reforms for the people in a government or better efiiciency for the company. As an example, take the case of India. For years, there has been a stiff competition between the two political parties BJP and Congress. When BJP defeated congress in the lastest polls, the new Prime Minister, Narendra Modi, had the responsibility of introducing reforms better than those by Congress, to gain confidence of people and also to avoid counter charges from the opposition. Inthis case, the opposition acted as a competitor which kept a check on the current government by BJP. Indeed, the positive results can be seen in the latest demonetization reform.
Admittedly, there are times when competition among leaders in a company lacerates the company due to violence ot treachery. Competition sometimes forces people to adopt illegal means. Also, cooperation among people reduces the time and effort. Take the example of a company in which a new leader has to be elected. The employees upon peaceful discussion arrive at a conclusion that a certain employee will be the leader, and they will keep changing the leaders so that everyone gets a fair chance. This certainly saves time and sounds like a peaceful and convinient path. However, the company will never have the most efficient leader in power for a long time. Also, there will be nothing that drives the current leader to perform better. Thus, coorperation fails to bring out the best in the people.
Healthy competition is thus the best for increasing the efficieny of a government, industry or other fields. Instilling in young people the spirit of competition will enhance their alacrity and determination in any particular field. Hence,The urge to be the best and the fruits obtained in the end by achieving the best are the best indicators of success and satisfiction in any field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15717539863 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87219438294 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537585421412 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1608142451 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0769230769 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8846153846 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215902012617 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592542845296 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673584482379 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129209902014 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067739753115 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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