The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership is an essential quality that needs to be developed in the youth of the society. I agree with the fact that leaders should have more cooperative skills than just competing continously.
Firstly, a leader should be cooperative because it helps to improve the team work. Workers and other members of the group will be giving positve suggestion that may lead to the improvement in the organization. The fear, that presenting a new idea would lead to more burden on myself would always prevent me from doing so. But in a cooperative enviornment people are confident that my leader would ponder over the situation and then help us gain the desired output.
Secondly, people obey and listen a cooperative leader or head of department. For example in a hospital where the management is focused on getting profit margins improved and be competitive in the market, the doctors just start resisting to the work overload and the quality of work is affected seriously. At the end the patient would suffer which would cause one to fall out of the competition. On the other hand, having a chairman in university who helps student who helps students figure out their issues, supports them for international competitions and assisits them in going over administrative hurdles would lead to a more energetic response from the students. They would come out better and more competitive than students of other departments.
Moreover, it is human nature that, if he is continously being assigned more tasks and his boss is making him do extra work so as to remain competitive, he would start developing ill will. The discontended worker is not an asset for any organization. Though, the output of the company improves for the time being but eventually it would lead to a major decline. It often leads to the formation of groups within the organization and they start working to get their boss changed or force him to accept their demands.
Though, having the spirit to be the best in market the company, government or industry to remain competitive in their fields but it should be well planned and combined with cooperative feelings.
Thus, having a sense of competition is good for a leader to have, but as a single man cannot construct a building by himself so is the case with a leader. He has to be cooperative while having a sense of improving his organization. Competition is good as far as the employs having fixed salaries don't start getting irritated by its burden. So, we can conclude that competing while being cooperative is the best quality a leader could have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a new idea would lead to more burden on myself would always prevent me from doin...
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...s the best quality a leader could have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92660550459 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82144772986 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3189423682 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112866512824 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366884347199 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285955213666 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562150555037 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297359963045 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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