The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

I agree with the statement, the best for a spciety to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by intilling in them a sense of coopertaion, not competition. Team player is very important to be successful in life. It is better to cooperate with each other and move ahead towards postitivity rather than competing always.

Until we get into corporate world, we go through plathora of competitive examinations to get into best college and best company to start our career with. During this time, we have been competitive like hell. But in long run, it is more of cooperation than competition. For example, in an IT industry, to develop a project there are set of people forming a team and working towards the development of the project. Set of deliverables and goal are set which needs to be done within a stipulated time. In order to meet the target and come up with the best project/ solution entire team works and cooperates with each other. In this scenario team members cannot afford to compete with each other, otherwise they will never come up with a perfect solution and project. They cooperate with each other religiously and meet the requirements.

Same goes for all the instances of day-to-day life. Be it a team of doctor contributing together in a patient's surgery and saving a life. They cannot be competitive at that point and start a race to save the patient. They coordinate and cooperate with each other and come up with positive decisions to save the patient's life. Another example I would like to give in order to support my reason for the agreement of this topic. A political party have so many members, they take constructive decisions with cooperation and works towards nations progress.

However, society should prepare a spirit of competiton in young blood, so that they always come with with best possible solution inorder to compete with other teams. At the same time they should cooperate within team. Cricket match is the best example here, team players cooperate with each other inorder to defeat another team. They play with a team spirit to give their best and beat the opposition. But again, this is limited to the performance in the game. Outside, opposite team members also cooperate with each other and has team spirit respecting each other.

Thus, I would like to conculde that competitive spirit is important for best result. On the other hand, no one can succeed without cooperation. Hence, the best for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by intilling in them a sense of coopertaion, not competition.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'into the best'.
Suggestion: into the best
...hora of competitive examinations to get into best college and best company to start our c...
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Suggestion:
...operation than competition. For example, in an IT industry, to develop a project ...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...tion than competition. For example, in an IT industry, to develop a project there ar...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...am of doctor contributing together in a patients surgery and saving a life. They cannot ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
... up with positive decisions to save the patients life. Another example I would like to g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
...n young blood, so that they always come with with best possible solution inorder to compe...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...ng blood, so that they always come with with best possible solution inorder to compete wi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.148 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048 0.0444667217837 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138 0.12292977631 112% => OK
Participles: 0.028 0.0406280797675 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71344981095 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.038 0.030933414821 123% => OK
Particles: 0.006 0.0016655270985 360% => OK
Determiners: 0.102 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016 0.0249443105267 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.002 0.0148568991511 13% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2654.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 450.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89777777778 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251111111111 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168888888889 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124444444444 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71344981095 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448888888889 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 49.5884770128 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3076923077 23.380412469 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8183589818 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.076923077 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 23.380412469 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.346153846154 0.674092028746 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 42.4188034188 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.69491525424 1.64882698954 103% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43499406711 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102380476556 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0899888778538 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470693207427 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13749645286 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153491793364 0.161403998019 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190795985241 0.0892212321368 214% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384040546522 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0906217842409 0.0692045440612 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366443125982 0.275328986314 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212540904738 0.0653680567796 325% => Less connections among paragraphs

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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