There is a famous apothegm that "Don't win the game, learn how to win the game". When a child is born all he is taught about how to be ahead in the competition he is never told about how could you be able to take the nation or the society ahead.
A great leader "Gandhiji" once said that if there is a competition between a monkey and a fish about how fast one can climb up a tree, then who would win ? This all means that the competition should be based on once abilities. In this era, all of us are blindly competing for a thing out of which most of us even don't know what would be development for them by doing this. In colleges, schools every single of us is trying to get those silly good marks at the end of the day, so that he could beat the girl next to him. But none of them both knows why they are really doing that?
Only few of them is passionate about doing thing or learning things, and those few of them we treat them 'Radical Thinkers'. Radical thinkers are also one of us who is doing things they are passionate about. Getting good marks could help you to do great in short term but learning skills would be long term beneficial.
If one's making a mistake then it is his fault but if every one is making same mistake then ofcourse it is system's fault. Even when a child is learning those first few words he is expected not to lose the game. Before preparing young people for leadership, we should instill the sense of cooperation in child itself. He should be taught about how to cooperate each other in their small things including studies, organizing festivals at home. They should know that helping the other person would bring more development in their personality not by beating them to get that small medal.If every single youth of the society is thinking in that manner, only than it would be possible to get great leaders in government or industry. If they are aware of doing things cooperatively then only they could bring two nations together for the good of society.
In the end I remember one incident happend between two CEO's of two leading tech companies "Facebook" & "Microsoft". It was the time when Mark was struggling about making facebook ubiquitous so he went to Bill Gates and asked the solution of same problem and that was the time both of them came up with the idea of "Login With Facebook" at every site. It shows that even two competitve companies do cooperate each other so that every one of them could make it better.
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There is a famous apothegm that 'Dont win the game, learn how to win the game...
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...or a thing out of which most of us even dont know what would be development for them...
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...s would be long term beneficial. If ones making a mistake then it is his fault b...
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...take then ofcourse it is systems fault. Even when a child is learning those first few wor...
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...by beating them to get that small medal.If every single youth of the society is th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192233009709 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.172815533981 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.073786407767 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485436893204 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0757281553398 0.0444667217837 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126213592233 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.052427184466 0.0406280797675 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68918706746 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021359223301 0.030933414821 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00194174757282 0.0016655270985 117% => OK
Determiners: 0.095145631068 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0291262135922 0.0249443105267 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0271844660194 0.0148568991511 183% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2522.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 458.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50655021834 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.227074235808 0.366273622748 62% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.168122270742 0.280924506359 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.115720524017 0.200843997647 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0786026200873 0.132149295362 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68918706746 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473799126638 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 53.2589843174 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1052631579 23.380412469 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.029231854 59.4972553346 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.736842105 141.124799967 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1052631579 23.380412469 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 40.9174902321 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.24836601307 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376462434753 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134325086009 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0779395544915 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502221464653 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151325923573 0.149214159877 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127872603538 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075152270821 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279267565989 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0221614122517 0.0692045440612 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228491030951 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598617301733 0.0653680567796 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.