The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Youths are the building blocks of a Nation. The author is claiming that, for young kids, cooperating with each other should be taught rather than making them compete with one another. I do agree with the claim because if young kids start competing with each other they may go beyond the limits.
leadership in government, industry or other fields like sports are important and the front runner should be able to control the team. This can happen only when all the team members are ready to cooperate with each other.
I would like to come up with an example. I was the captain of the school cricket team. I had to take decisions for the betterment of team which many of the teammates didn't like eventually. Two of them refused to cooperate. This period was painstaking for me. I had to somehow convince them. They were very torpid. Gradually every one came along and we won the tournament. Cooperation can definitely be the key to success.
Another example I would like to come up with is that of United States of America.This country consists of eclectic people. This country is a developed nation because of the cooperation and hard working nature of people in that particular country. The country is 100 years far ahead of some developing nations.I would like to re iterate that 'cooperation can definitely lead to success rather than competing and quarreling among themselves'
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...rs far ahead of some developing nations.I would like to re iterate that cooperati...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19140625 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.18359375 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0625 0.0880659088768 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05078125 0.0497285424764 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0546875 0.0444667217837 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140625 0.12292977631 114% => OK
Participles: 0.03515625 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58449754354 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390625 0.030933414821 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0078125 0.0016655270985 469% => OK
Determiners: 0.11328125 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.03515625 0.0249443105267 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078125 0.0148568991511 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1386.0 2732.02544248 51% => OK
No of words: 237.0 452.878318584 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84810126582 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337552742616 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244725738397 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15611814346 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113924050633 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58449754354 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 219.290929204 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.48968727796 123% => OK
Word variations: 61.8758012276 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 13.9411764706 23.380412469 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0710258827 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5294117647 141.124799967 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 23.380412469 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.176470588235 0.674092028746 26% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 38.4137503103 51.4728631049 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.27027027027 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305561166463 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103053434031 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11401957486 0.077325440228 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493032485646 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209486973142 0.149214159877 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103851208191 0.161403998019 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059398340632 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303426461477 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0330247610611 0.0692045440612 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191059627647 0.275328986314 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249298535139 0.0653680567796 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.