The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Cooperation between youngsters is essential for developing leadership in nearly all the fields. Darwin's theory of selectivity says "survival of fittest", but people however take it otherwise. They don't realise that his theory is based only on the existence of the speices not to the extent of well being of the society. However, in certain fields it is good to have some competition as it incourages to build out a better prospectus, and bring innovation to the world.
Better results are produced by helping each other and not by working against. A society which faces some of the most common threats like terrorism, climate change and/not limited to refugee problems can benefit from such an endeavour. If various diffrent organization come togethter to solve the same crisis. Recently, a joint millitary operation by US, Iraq and Kurdish forces have attacked Mosul which is under the clutches of ISIS. The joint millitary operation gives the humanitarian forces an upperhand in a region filled with tunnels and chances of guriella warfare. It gave millitary a upper hand in fighting against these anti-human psyhcopaths. Cooperation ensures a quick and beneficient eradication of the problems that the world faces.
Competition denounce to one winner but cooperation leads a team as a whole to win. Those in congress must realize that their fighting and pulling legs of other politicians is, not what the country wants to see. Government officials must come together to work for a better society, for which they were elected.
However, sometimes competition is required to keep the fighiting spirit. It enables us to work harder and come out of our comfort zone, and giver our best. In every four year world witnesses Olympic sports. Athelete work very hard and dilligently and in every olympic we are bound to see records being broken. These records show what as a human we are capable of. Competition can be healthy for a society, for bringing out the best in people.
To sum it up, though competition is important to excel to an unimaginable level. However, cooperation is required for the benefits it provides to the society. Young leaders must understand the qualities of cooperation and not competition. They must realize that their goal should be betterment of society and not on their inner self.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238770685579 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.163120567376 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709219858156 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0520094562648 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0472813238771 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118203309693 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0406280797675 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84649271484 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401891252955 0.030933414821 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00709219858156 0.0016655270985 426% => OK
Determiners: 0.096926713948 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016548463357 0.0249443105267 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118203309693 0.0148568991511 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2326.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 380.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12105263158 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376315789474 0.366273622748 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318421052632 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207894736842 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134210526316 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84649271484 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 66.4261783326 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8333333333 23.380412469 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5256193794 59.4972553346 46% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 23.380412469 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.208333333333 0.674092028746 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 47.6754385965 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.52252252252 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397338551081 0.391690518653 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0796374526226 0.123202303941 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0748737918451 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.443538260367 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112356817639 0.149214159877 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130710075821 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791820908488 0.0892212321368 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276630674092 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0505919393928 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261048462948 0.275328986314 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416140270197 0.0653680567796 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.