Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: people who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Imagination and experience are two different factors which can be opposite aspects of vision. Statement claims that since imagination supports people who don’t have experiences, imagination would help better than experiences. However, imagination requires basic information which in need of bolstering ideas or something that has to be done. How does the imagination come from? It is surely come from the human brain. Basically, they couldn’t imagine easily if people don’t have any type of information. Ideas are come from imagination that is usually come from reading books, traveling a world, studying some field of study. All of these imagination should be come from the experiences.
To begin with, experiences are shed a light when situation is in a predicament; some type of TV entertainment; how to survive in Amazon or how to survive in desert is usually showing the skills of their experiences to survive in their harsh environmental situation. People in the show don’t imagine that natural food in wild is help to metabolize their health, instead, they already have been experienced or have read book about that specific food.
Moreover, experiences make people more flexible. Because there are various types of aspect in the life-span, people who favor experiences over imagination are trying to cooperate more and make benefit better. Experience-favored people understand the theory that there are still diverse information, and getting more passion to learn more on any given field of study or businesses. When it comes to think about valuable asset? It will be the experience that will boost technical learning.
In conclusion, there can be debate that imagination-favored people who believe that Aristotle philosophy is one of imagination from his mind. However, as it turned out, he was the person who experienced and tried to learn in that era and finally understood the vision that how to live with his philosophy. Many people want to know how to imagine; imagine doesn’t come from absurd belief such as it will come out of nowhere, but experiences give more and better ideas because experience would understand whatever the fact is or whatever society goes through, then they will behave like the one who has different aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 649, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this imagination' or 'these imaginations'?
Suggestion: this imagination; these imaginations
...d, studying some field of study. All of these imagination should be come from the experiences. ...
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Line 1, column 677, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'?
Suggestion: come
...udy. All of these imagination should be come from the experiences. To begin with...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce that will boost technical learning. In conclusion, there can be debate that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32686980609 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03627139633 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0130755484 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262390037999 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949500262022 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573831249459 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164666011611 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606875160074 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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