The effectiveness of a country’s leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country’s citizens.
Statement claims that when country’s leader is measured thoroughly, it is best to observing the well-being citizen. The exposition of well-being is to being health and well-being citizen is to have rehabilitation by support of government; it is basically for the citizen’s healthcare. However, when it comes to talking about effectiveness of country’s leaders. The condition of effectiveness of a country’s leader is not measured by looking at well-being citizen, instead it will be better for observing what leader is doing for country.
To begin with, the effectiveness of a country’s leader is how to make a ‘change’ for nation. Leader of country, after inauguration, should always which is best fit and beneficial for the country; president should consider self-defense of country, economy, and environmental issue in order for change the nation. Even there has been called ‘100days’, when people measure the efficiency of president. For example, 44th president, Barack Obama made one of big problem about recession in internal economy, and change the politics by his logics. It wasn’t easy at his first step, but he eventually made his step going forward by having Obama-care act, non-nuclear act for international change.
Additionally, the effectiveness of presidency used be measured by leadership. Presidency is not an easy position; whereas it is the position that only one person can be very much suffered from multifarious types of issues, others called citizen of nation will commode with leader’s decision and dedication. Leadership for presidency requires persuasion about versatile issues. Take for instance, electric energy requires more on manufacturing some goods, but environmental issue affects that problem. Presidents should make a valuable but not headlong decision at that moment; he should make more negotiation with factory’s owners and environmental experts and persuasion is the key word for the problem.
Admittedly, well-being of that country’s citizen measures the effectiveness of a country’s leader. Well-being is about healthcare and protect from whichever has negative effect and to help or embolden the well-being, government and president utilize policy. However, since statement is talking about condition called effectiveness, there are versatile issues that should be done and made by effectiveness of presidency.
In conclusion, the impact of country’s leader is measured by how to change and leadership. Those two are symbiosis; one helps the other, vice versa. This will plumb and get deep down on how presidency help for the nation and citizen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a country's leader is how to make a 'change' for nation. Leader o...
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Line 9, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...idency help for the nation and citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76515151515 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50248337714 2.79657885939 125% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507575757576 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5820867502 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.15 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457798758096 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18402257062 0.0831039109588 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194753702806 0.0758088955206 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297500956055 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157096366479 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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