Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Justice and moral are the ethics that people should follow. On the other hand, written laws hardly follow on the moral circumstances. Why is it hard to follow? Because written laws are not meant to be general vision which means that laws circumscribed aspects on criminals and meant to punish criminals. Judging situation discreet is very hard to pursue and follow all people in a society. People spent time within boundary of laws and they are willing to follow justice.
The statement claims individual in general, should follow just laws but flout unjust laws. If this is only for individual moral laws, then personally, we don’t have to follow it strictly. However, the responsibility of individual behavior in a “society” is very critical by itself because this is not individual perspectives, but for the overall justice in society. Furthermore, when we think about the responsibility, this is not only issue for individual being but it surely influences other people’s behavior. There are so many characteristics in the society and in order to balance most of them, laws should make a “neutral”, which laws try to achieve. Working in the company, take for instance, there is one person who defraud on the marketing and deflect by attributing on others. This person will go through court system, but as well as with his company, even though company didn’t do anything wrong. This situation seems very uncomfortable because company didn’t take any action on this problem. However, when we think about this problematic circumstance, company has responsibility to control their subordinate which disobeys just laws; they should’ve control person so that they made it clear that they follow overall society justice. Therefore, no matter what laws are telling, we should follow the laws.
In closing, we understand following just laws whereas there is suspicious mind on following unjust laws because it doesn’t look fair. However, when we think about the society’s base of foundation and making standard, we need to follow unjust laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...esponsibility of individual behavior in a 'society' is very critical by...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... balance most of them, laws should make a 'neutral', which laws try to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1399978944 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518181818182 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.740449438202 540% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7597003385 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3888888889 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22152872912 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771457754256 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076843712264 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151840952933 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634285433505 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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