Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
weather the government should go by their own will or reply on the public opinion is a debatable topic. On one hand, many practical problems are not acknowledged, if government rely on their own judgement. On the other hand, ultimately government is doing any thing for the people, they should undoubtedly carry out the will of the people.
Firstly, when government rely on their own judgement they might be neglecting many practical problems. For example, recently in Indian government have demolished 500 and 1000 notes from their currency to fight corruption. Though, they have done this for the well being of the country, they have neglected several practical problems. Majority of the people were affected, since there was no way to exchange notes for the next 3 or 4 days and more over no ATM money withdrawal machine was not working. In addition, if government rely on their own decisions then there is a chance of loosing harmony in the society.
Secondly, If the government go according to the decision on people, then the chances of getting wrong will do down and they can easily acknowledge pros and cons of any plan or a situation. In this case people might share their inconvenience and practical problems, so that government can change their action on the plans accordingly. According to democracy "government is for the people, by the people and of the people" majority of the nations in the world follow democracy, this indicates that the nations follow democracy are in peace and development. So, it will always be wise to go by the people of the nation.
Some might argue, if government go by the people will then there will delay in taking decisions as a result development of the nation will not go accordingly. However, there is no single case where if government go by the public opinion and still undeveloped. For example, USA follow democracy and China follow Communism by this it is clear that decisions based on the public will might not effect the development.
In conclusion, government can work by acknowledging the pros and cons of a plan if they go by public opinion. Admittedly government can take quick decisions when they work accordingly. However, such decisions might not work well in majority of the situations. Following according to the public would me more effective method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99230769231 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87877928143 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44358974359 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6494439501 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.473684211 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275396604922 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984120436034 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067551337852 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171000189729 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874056994185 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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