Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Education is the most important for any person , also education is not just necessary for the student who wants to study , but it is also important for any country to grow and flourish.Therefore,I believe that government should provide free university education to the students who has got admission in university but not able to pay his fees.
Education is the most important part for any person, because education helps the person grow flourish and help the society. In fact education is not just a necessity it is a right from which no one should be deprived. If a good student is deprived to go a university for his studies, because of lack of money then , it is the government fault and government should pay for the education of the student. It is a question for many why government should pay for a students, the answer lies in the fact that every person in a society is not equal, some are poor and some are rich. The rich are able to afford the studies of their children , but poor sometimes can not. So, if this trend is there in any country in which poor students are not then what will be the consequences? The biggest consequence will be the gap between the rich and poor will increase, poor will become poorer and rich will become more rich. The poor society will not be able to come in the same economic and social status as the rich. This causes the most serious problems because in any country when there is more gap between a society, and such societies are not able to flourish.
As I have already discussed that society contains many kinds of people some will be intelligent while some will not be excellent. Let's take an example from India where the Former President of India Mr. APJ Abdul Kalam, who was not only a great president but also a great scientist. He was from a very poor family in which they could not even afford complete meal for their family. But Mr. Kalam was a prodigy and was very interested in studies and was a very good student. But when he was going to college for his higher studies , he did not had enough money to pay the fees. But government paid his fees and he could complete his studies. Later on, the poor student who could not afford his college fees became a gem for India. Mr. Kalam not only helped India to get Advanced Missile technology which increased its dominance around the globe, but also leaded many projects of Indian Space and Research Organization. He one of the reason that India had advanced so much in Space and weapon technologies. Hence, from this example we can see that a poor student who is helped by government can prove to be gem for his country. Furthermore, if government do not pays for poor university fees then they are getting deprived of many such gems who can not only help themselves, but will also help the society.
However, since many governments and many countries are not very rich. Hence they can not provide free education to each and every student. But they should atleast try to sanction money for students who are hardworking and have the potential to do good for societies. Also, helping a poor student not just makes the society flourish but will also decrease the burden which is poverty . Because if government helps one poor student this does not mean that it is just helping just one. A successful student will not only help himself but will also help his other family members such as brothers and sisters for their studies. In this way a family will grow. If this trend is continued than it will a great benefit for the whole country.
In conclusion, I would say that education is very important for any person. It is a right and no body should be deprived of it. Government should help poor students to complete their education because these students will make the government to thrive. But hidering of the progress of student from his education will not let student to contribute for his society and his country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214191852825 0.238963963785 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.157687253614 0.154291517835 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867279894875 0.0886310499679 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0775295663601 0.0506014161523 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0525624178712 0.0449626384858 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101182654402 0.123526278965 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0210249671485 0.0379742944744 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49337071111 2.82910677849 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023653088042 0.0316879551592 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0998685939553 0.0950106342287 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.042049934297 0.0245489744465 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0223390275953 0.0157978311181 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3933.0 2899.98275862 136% => OK
No of words: 707.0 478.390804598 148% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56294200849 6.0591788892 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.15649799773 4.65681771538 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.280056577086 0.369966551584 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222065063649 0.285172536893 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148514851485 0.207245337619 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0919377652051 0.136322040163 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49337071111 2.82910677849 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 234.298850575 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.35360678925 0.492565540709 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6087238965 56.8184620615 79% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 21.1264367816 156% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4242424242 23.7468607788 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9645181483 62.0618507366 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 143.81877709 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4242424242 23.7468607788 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.393939393939 0.728815259664 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.71264367816 246% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.6307487892 52.2641144681 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.16894977169 1.64547068916 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26273285654 0.39480681544 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152260831276 0.11556216369 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104483317967 0.0736162880345 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444402246295 0.531340600358 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142291135686 0.15197228837 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903986035602 0.158818324754 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795929193398 0.0851127212816 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44110525073 0.388921930462 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0319913262666 0.0677916285025 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220692419891 0.28015025965 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936089937183 0.0610219844235 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.8591954023 111% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 5.30459770115 358% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.96264367816 40% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.10632183908 123% => OK
Negative topic words: 17.0 3.93390804598 432% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 15.0862068966 186% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.0 Out of 6